In the woods to where we’ve trailed along,
Now there’s no use walking away
from the whiff of the evaded conversations
only because they remind you of a truth-
of the fact that you’re a lily-livered man.
The evasion brings no certitude
of your victory over those feelings
For you may fail to feel what you breathe
But I’m aware of the pollens of those emotions
That are fluttering impatiently around you.
They are the exponents of your opponents,
And it’s your luck till when you escape from those
For they’re on a search of the perfect moment,
To settle on the land and emanate from it,
with a peculiar passion to confront you again!
I loved the way you crafted such a beautiful imagery with your skillful usage of words, thanks for sharing such a heartwarming post! According to your convenience please do read some of my writings would love to know what you think about them 😊
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That means so much to me! It’s nearly the end of the day, and with this comment, seems like I did something productive today! Thank you! And yes, I’m definitely gonna check out your blog 🙂 Keep in touch please!
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By writing such an incredible post I’d say you created something flawlessly magnificent so saying that you did something productive would be an understatement & no need to say thanks the pleasure was all mine to witness the brilliance of your creativity. Lastly, thanks for respecting my invitation I look forward to hearing from you in the near future 😊
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Oh my! You’re so kind. Thank you!!! (Oops I again said that- sorry but gratitude is simply flowing out. I can’t help!) The same words for you too, for I love your blog so much. You’ll see me being there again and again!!
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How can someone so young create such magic with such simple words…..
It is truly an honour to read your writings… You are an epitome of the word ‘Genius’. Your writing is inspirational. Really, I go to the same school as you and have been fortunate to read many of your articles.
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There are some comments I usually keep on reading again and again, for they bring a strangely effective impetus in my heart. An impetus that takes the form of another good reason to never stop writing. And no wonders, your comment is one of those! So thanks a lot for making my day :*
And yay same school?! Let’s meet some day💜💜
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Yes, of course! I would love that.
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Which class though?😕
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12th-A…..
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Swastika didi wali class na?😅 You’ve a lovely classmate, and I envy you in that case!
How did you drop by my blog??
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Yes… The class of the SWASTIKA!
Well, the first day I had joined the school, I had heard principle sir talk about your blog in the assembly. So when I started my own, I just thought of reading your blog first to learn how to write well and you ARE quite popular, of course.
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Okay!! I’m glad to have come in contact with you. Thanks for all the kind words😘
Happy blogging! 😉
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Waking up in the morning and reading this, Apeksha, I am having a good day already.I really appreciate and am inspired by your ability to craft prosaic sentiments into such reflective and wonderful pieces of poetry.
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Apologies for the late response but I’m genuinely out of blogging rn. Thanks for all the kind words💖They mean so much to me. And yeah, do not miss my conversation with your classmate right here. Hehe! Happy blogging.
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This is amazing! ❤
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Hey thank you very much💗💗
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This was so beautiful, Apeksha 🙂
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